Over the course of the past few writing Mondays, I’ve discussed dialogue. This has probably been the hardest part of writing my novel. It takes so much research to get a dialect correct, especially a historical one. While you’re working on that end of things, you also can’t forget about your readers. They want to believe your story; therefore, dialect is necessary. However, they also don’t want to be bogged down by strange words and phrases. That’s a tough balance. It’s one that takes time to hone.
Today, I thought I’d share with you some of the words and phrases I’ve found helpful in my journey. I will warn you, overuse of any of these makes a good novel tedious to read. Space them out. Listen for the rhythm of the words, and ask yourself if your characters really would say such things. Dialect should be specific to each character’s background. Show the readers your characters by including it in your next novel.
My current WIP is a novel about the American Revolution. The following words and phrases are specific to the late 18th century, or were simply helpful while building the dialect of my characters. You’ll find some of the words are still used today, but the frequency or use has changed. I would not suggest using control find and replace. These words will not work 100% of the time in every context. They also must be used sparingly. I think I’ve emphasized that enough…Your reader will become tired of strange phrases, so sprinkle them in like a flavoring of salt to a dish. A little goes a long way…
1. aye=yes
2. charmed=pleased
3. turncoat=traitor
4. naught=nothing
5. have words=an argument
6. Sabbath=Sunday
7. mayhap=maybe or perhaps
8. parlor=sitting room
9. I dare=I encourage or I threaten
10. unholy=anything that is to be looked down upon or a shameful scene
11. kin=family
12. in spades=in plenty
13. thereabouts=around there
14. merriment=celebration
15. unfounded=without reason
16. indeed=to agree
17. civilized pursuits=upperclass activities/engagements
18. beseeching=begging
19. summons=message
20. recompense=apologies
21. nigh=nearly
22. wee=little
23. till=until
24. lass=young lady
25. on the morrow=tomorrow or morrow for morning
26. very well=to agree
27. nay=no
28. lobsterback=redcoat
29. ’twas, ’twasn’t= it was
30. ye=you (Note: thee was used less frequently at this time.)
31. ’twill=it will
32. yer=your (I used this one sparingly.)
33. Mercy=exclamation of shock or surprise
34. Right Honorable Lady= to address a lady in the upperclass
35. shan’t= should not
36. shall= ‘ll, do, would, will
37. doth=does/do
38. ’tis=it is
39. mustn’t=must not
40. Is it even so?=Really? Are you sure?
41. Many good thanks, Many and hearty thankings= Thank you
42. eve=night